Alien 2.0
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I liked the fast food gag - actually, I like all of it. I know you're Polish and the outline as is is the result of running the original through a translator - but that in itself gives it and entirely original vibe. I mean, if you imaged this - not as an alien parody script - but a scene in which (I dunno) a Ukrainian (possibly ?) - someone with only a very third hand understanding of Alien themselves is - very straight faced, very seriously - trying to describe their understanding of a movie they're obviously barely seen to some other character who, themselves, has never actually seen Alien in the first place...
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You know, like - if you've ever overhead kids, when one of them is trying to make out they've seen and understand what an adult movie they've obviously never seen themselves is all about to someone obviously younger who has no clue - you've basically got two strands of humor working through the same piece. As they're telling their version of Alien we see it. We know its wrong, but the way its wrong is where the humor is.
I know that is entirely unintentional and that may not necessarily be this script - but if you were to step back and look at it this way: this script has the potential to be one of the funniest, original takes on the genre I think I've ever come across, handled right.
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mateuszswiderski
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Thank you, this comment is very valuable to me. I will try to keep your advice. :)
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mateuszswiderski
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Thank you for your comment. In truth the first time I do something like that and if someone likes it, then this is a great reward for me :)
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illisia
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The vacuum cleaner part was quite funny :-)
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