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This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Natečajni vnos #44 za E-Khattaba Logo

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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 2 let ago

    show time

    • 2 let ago
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 3 let ago

    NICE!

    • 3 let ago
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 3 let ago

    very excellent logo

    • 3 let ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 let ago

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80 .

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 4 let ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 let ago

    Sure, right away.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 4 let ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 let ago

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 4 let ago
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Nosilec natečaja
      • 4 let ago

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I love the color scheme.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I'm very happy.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 4 let ago
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Nosilec natečaja
      • 4 let ago

      Entries #47 #36

      • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    I love it.

    • 4 let ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Nosilec natečaja
    • 4 let ago

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 4 let ago

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